Wednesday, March 12, 2008

The Fake Flower

The Fake Flower

                  “Happy journey and take care of yourself. Don’t work too much. Remember you can always delegate some tasks to us - your offshore team… although we don’t wish for more work but still…”, he tried to crack a small joke but somehow stopped abruptly. He had left with no words. She was leaving for onsite. In a couple of minutes she would be in for the security check and then he could see her only after 3 months. It was hard. He very well knew it. It was anyways hard for him to be away from her on weekends, whole 3 months were beyond imagination. Both were simply looking at each other. No one said anything. Perhaps, all that was to be conveyed was being conveyed through the eyes or to say the watery eyes. Finally he accumulated all his guts, “I… I just wanted to ask you one question… Not that you don’t love me or not that I don’t trust you or so… but… You won’t forget me in these 3 months, will you?”

                  There was a long silence in between. She looked at him. His eyes were filled with tears. She had never seen him getting so much emotional. Even her condition wasn’t different… but the question he had asked her had to be answered…

                  “Take this…”, she just gave him a fake flower stitched on her decorative purse. He was puzzled… “What’s this for?”, he asked.. “This is the answer to your question… I’ll love you and won’t forget you till this flower dies…”, and she hugged him. Tears rolled over his cheeks. He felt like staying with her like this forever… but they had to move on… She soon went for her flight and he returned, with the fake flower in his hand held close to his heart. He had to preserve it… preserve it for the lifetime… for it was her souvenir …. His love’s souvenir …

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

aaaa
ti mulgi kashi vedi aahe ...
tya mulala tichyavar bharosa nahi ...
and fake flowers kaay alladin ne aanun dila
-JeRK

Niranjan Khandekar said...

dude.... first of all.. i think thts a typical feeling most of them get when their partner is leaving them for long time or so.. there is no point of no faith n all in fact thats insecurity.. when u r possessive abt ur partner these tyes of feelings are obvious.. regarding the flower... i have already mentioned that she picked a decorative flower from her purse....

Sunayana said...

Hi, just went thru ur blog "That's life" and at the end of it I saw ur blogspot's address...so just clicked on it out of curiosity and found more of ur blogs here...U write gud...Most of ur blogs are related to love and lovers...isn't it? :) Well...great...that's wat I can say...c ya...Keep writing!

Rahul Chopadekar said...

Are nirya............

Tuzi hi kala mala mahiti nhavati......

Chan chan mitra...........

Zakkas lihitos.........

Ek techie banala lover..........

Kulbhushan said...

hey really gud 1...
i liked d to n fro sequence in d story...

i only hope u r writtin d story like a painter...(painting d object tryin to make it look real still avoidin painting own reflection)

hope this is not a way out to ur frustration...it doesn't look like dat atall...

waitin to read much more
n planin to start ma own...:D

Prajakta said...

Longestttttt blog ever!!!